Translation Check by Chrouya
Script: Dog Days' 10 [timed - xMyth]
Workraw: Dog Days' - 10 480 AAC

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The opening battle of  Union Festival
The opening battle of the Union Festa
{double space there. Festa for consisntency}

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Head of Science, Princess, please go ahead.{shiseki is a nickname for rico i guess~}
Head of Inventions, Princess, please go ahead.{shiseki is a nickname for rico i guess~}
{consistency with latest ep}

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...the chief of the Royal Research Institute Ricotta,{and continued by ricotta~}
...Chief of the Royal Research Institute, Ricotta,
{qc}

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{sign}
Biscotti's Third Unit
{or squadron --> then you have to change line 61/62/66 accordingly.}

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All right! Our first team is pushing them forward.
All right! Our first team is pushing forward.
{You don't push an enemy forward. You go forward, they fall back.}

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Okay, attack Gallette's main unit with all of your might, and take down Pastillage's front lines!{Yeah, to the Gallet's main unit attack at all force and crash down Pastillage's front lines!}{4:16}
Okay, attack Galette's main unit with all of your might, and take down Pastillage's front lines!{Yeah, to the Gallet's main unit attack at all force and crash down Pastillage's front lines!}{4:16}
{typo}

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This is going to be an all-or-nothing battle.{tlc onegai zenmetsu nani sore?~}
{zenmetsu (全滅) means annihilation. A decisive battle, in this case. So this is all right.}

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manage to defeat a high-ranking officer, {05:12.354}
manage to capture grounds in the area, 
{or manage to conquer the battlefield}
{no other problem found here}

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It's a once in a life time event, after all.
It's a once-in-a-lifetime event, after all.
{hyphenated and lifetime being one word}

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I was a bit interested in how battles are held nowdays, that's all.{adel said desu~ kawaii~ well odin the picture about her funny faces was right before this scene~}
I was a bit interested in how battles are held nowadays, that's all.{adel said desu~ kawaii~ well odin the picture about her funny faces was right before this scene~}
{nowadays}

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Let's show them our air-fighting Biscotti-style technique!{tlc on ricotta accent~}
Let's show them our Biscotti-style aerial combat!{tlc on ricotta accent~}
{Isn't it a coincidence such manoeuvers are called dogfights?}

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Rebecca, let's do our best and fight them!
Rebecca, let's release the bullet hell!
{literally "Release the bullet hell!"}

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This was truly a wonderful starting exchange of offence and defense!{maybe offence and defence}{yeah gomen spelling mistakes~}{you had no mistakes, I was making a suggestion for the editor}{ah ok~ yay desu~ that's like amazing i have a sentence with no spelling mistakes~}{you're not as bad as you think you are}{that really cheers me up~}
This was truly a wonderful starting exchange of offence and defence!
{In British English, most words that end on -ense are now -ence.}

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Princess, Head of Science, what was that move just now?!
{see fix above somewhere}


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Rico is, of course, and the Princess did put a lot of hard work into all that.{as in working out on the new attack?~}
Rico goes without saying, but even the Princess put a lot of hard work into all that.
{yes, that anti-air attack}
{can I write "goes without saying" like that here?}

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All their powers go up. They seem to go into some kind of hyper mode.{tlc nano desu~}
{no problem with this one. Abilities going up. Some sort of hyper mode.}

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There is a way to utilise it to bring smiles and hope to the people.
It's a fine way to bring smiles and hope to the people.
{The way is actually by showing it off like that.}

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He seems to have went straight for after finishing his fight with His Highness Gaul!
He seems to have went straight for them after finishing his fight with His Highness Gaul!

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Yep, it seems they needed  our rescue after all.
Yep, it seems they needed our rescue after all.
{double space}

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{sign@ 19:54}{28 lines until ED}{also there is a japanese sign around here saying pastillage etc in kanji~}
Pastillage Main Unit

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If the Hero king is-- i mean, if The Masked Hero is our opponent...
If the Hero King is-- i mean, if The Masked Hero is our opponent...

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The Union Festival is an event that takes place when all three countries are connected.
The Union Festa, an event that takes place when all three countries are connected.
{consistency}

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The first day of the battle was fun and explosive...{atsuku as in hot but well tlc~}
The first day of the battle was excitingly fun and explosive...
{you could translate atsuku (hot) as exciting here} {do what you want xD}

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The fun and commotion will continue!{continue from here on etc...sawagi needs tlc}
{I'm fine with sawagi being TL'd as commotion}

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Well then, see you soon.
Well then, see you next time.